startled by air

By the bay,
on cement cracked by weeds,
people sit like gulls fishing in dying daylight.
Fish bite, get taken, tossed, have one last
gulp and die.

Watch fish startled by air. Watch weeds bend beneath thin legs.
Watch gull-like people throw another line,
drown another beer,
unfazed.

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  1. Brian Miller Avatar
    Brian Miller

    when you look at it that way its pretty brutal…the taking of life without reverence or thougth…

  2. Brian Miller Avatar
    Brian Miller

    when you look at it that way its pretty brutal…the taking of life without reverence or thougth…

  3. Laurie Kolp Avatar
    Laurie Kolp

    Thought-provoking piece.

  4. Laurie Kolp Avatar
    Laurie Kolp

    Thought-provoking piece.

  5. lovemorestudio Avatar
    lovemorestudio

    An uncentimental approach to a dying scape– evocative piece. ~peace, Jason

  6. lovemorestudio Avatar
    lovemorestudio

    An uncentimental approach to a dying scape– evocative piece. ~peace, Jason

  7. Jody Costa Avatar
    Jody Costa

    thank you all for reading~ ๐Ÿ™‚

  8. Jody Costa Avatar
    Jody Costa

    thank you all for reading~ ๐Ÿ™‚

  9. Beth Winter Avatar
    Beth Winter

    An interesting perspective on fishing. I have always found it to be a centering activity although I rarely use bait and rarely keep what I catch. I would hope that once the fish were served up, the fisherman would say a prayer of thanks for the sacrifice. Crisp, succinct and thought provoking.

  10. Beth Winter Avatar
    Beth Winter

    An interesting perspective on fishing. I have always found it to be a centering activity although I rarely use bait and rarely keep what I catch. I would hope that once the fish were served up, the fisherman would say a prayer of thanks for the sacrifice. Crisp, succinct and thought provoking.

  11. Jody Costa Avatar
    Jody Costa

    Thanks Beth! When I wrote this, I was just struck by the scene of the fish so casually tossed to die on the sidewalk by all these fishermen. I eat all kinds of seafood so my reaction took me by surprise!

  12. Jody Costa Avatar
    Jody Costa

    Thanks Beth! When I wrote this, I was just struck by the scene of the fish so casually tossed to die on the sidewalk by all these fishermen. I eat all kinds of seafood so my reaction took me by surprise!

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